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Replace em-dashes with periods, commas, colons, or middle dots depending on context. Title separators use · to match brand style. Body copy uses shorter sentences instead of em-dash asides. Worker order email kept as-is (internal, not public). https://claude.ai/code/session_01VhWRYXbuqapZ9YkvksroaS
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<p>We believe a machine can make art — not by simulating it, but by performing it. A pen plotter doesn't reproduce an image. It draws one. The distinction matters.</p>
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<p>We believe a machine can make art. Not by simulating it, but by performing it. A pen plotter doesn't reproduce an image. It draws one. The distinction matters.</p>
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<p>Every PlotFlow edition begins as a vector drawing rebuilt from reference, path by path, for the AxiDraw to trace in ink. What the machine draws is what the machine drew: a physical record of movement through space and time.</p>
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<p>Every PlotFlow edition begins as a vector drawing, rebuilt from reference, path by path, for the AxiDraw to trace in ink. What the machine draws is what the machine drew: a physical record of movement through space and time.</p>
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<p>The medium itself is honest. Staedtler Triplus 0.3mm fineliner on Strathmore 300 Bristol. Ink flows at a rate determined by gravity, temperature, humidity, and the speed of the carriage. No two runs are identical, even from the same path data. Minor variation in line weight, ink saturation, and pen behavior is a feature of the process — never a flaw.</p>
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<p>The medium itself is honest. Staedtler Triplus 0.3mm fineliner on Strathmore 300 Bristol. Ink flows at a rate determined by gravity, temperature, humidity, and the speed of the carriage. No two runs are identical, even from the same path data. Minor variation in line weight, ink saturation, and pen behavior is a feature of the process. Never a flaw.</p>
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<p>We don't print. We don't reproduce. We plot. Each piece is drawn once, for one person, signed, and numbered. When an edition sells out, it is retired. The path data remains, but the physical run is finished.</p>
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